I am a Year 4 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 12. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello everyone today I created a slide show about my favorite you tuber Beck Bro Jack.I got a little bit of help from my older sister Luisapeta. Hope you enjoy it have a nice holidays
This is a very neat presentation Tafa about your favourite You Tuber. I like your background and your information. It is also very neat that you added the video in as well so people can see for themselves. Great work Tafa (And Luisapeta) From Kylie
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This is a very neat presentation Tafa about your favourite You Tuber. I like your background and your information. It is also very neat that you added the video in as well so people can see for themselves.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Tafa (And Luisapeta)
From Kylie
Hi Kylie,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog I had fun making this presentation with my sister and I hope you have a good holiday from Tafa